Cross country should change

We are learning how to make a Persuasive writing
it was tricky when I had to get an idea in my head!

I STRONGLY believe that cross country SHOULD have a Change like having relays and children should not be forced to run. And they wouldn’t stay home every year

Firstly, if children had a choice to run or not, maybe they would put more effort into running! It would be more fun and they could have a good time with their friends watching.

Secondly, Students should have a choice to run or not. Like what happens if they have really sore legs. Or they might have asthma. They should not have to run.
We should change cross country so students or people don’t stay home. Most kids stay home but maybe if it was more fun they

wouldn’t stay home and come more often. Like every year they would come and not stay home.
To conclude, I STRONGLY believe that cross country SHOULD have a Change like having relays and should not be forced. I believe this because making a change to the event could make cross country more fun, it should be a choice because some people might be injured, it could bring more of us to school.

Garden bed!!

WE are learning about perimeter. Perimeter means measuring the outside edges.

This was hard but I managed to do it but also we had to make metre´s up to
24 metre´s and it was so fun to make the bed and the flowers and the butterflys!!

Mr STINK

WALT – write using the senses to create pictures in the reader’s mind.

Mr Stink was wearing a black top that had holes EVERYWHERE and had faded black/brown. It was very dirty and baggy.

Mr stink had a coat that was brown but faded brown/dark grey and lots of rips like everywhere that you can’t see the coat anymore, only some parts of the coat is still seen. And mr stink HAD!! Found his coat in a rubbish bin. That his coat was all he had. He was so happy when he found it! 

He also got free food because that smell made everyone around RUN!! away because that smell is disgusting!!

He wore Black baggy pants had holes, dirty clothes that faded to brown because that he slipped on mud so many times that his pants turned brown.And his pants were so dirty that it looked that it was ImPoSsIbLe to wash cLeAn!! 

His hair was like SoOoOoOoOoOo MESYYYYYY that it was like that it was black and it turned dark grey AND it looked LIKE it wAs ImPoSsIbLe tO BrUsH. And mr STINK! Had NITS!!   

He smelt like a Rubbish bin mixed with dead mice and a dead Human body and a Liquidy poop from an Allergic dairy kitten. Mixed with a dead Dinosaur that is Extinct.he was still there by that time. And a dead pile of RATS.And a moldy PILE OF CHEESE.